My best experience

The best example I would say what I deserved is getting a good result for my hard work during my examination. I am quite a good learner and a reader. But I often fail in examination. I did not know why it happens to me. All others were average students, but yet they get passed. When I analyzed it, I came to know that my presentation is not good at all. I write whole story instead of the main points. I worked hard to make it correct. My teachers helped me too. It took 4 exams for me to get it correct. After those 4 exams, I fully changed my presentation style and I got first grade in my 5th exam. This was my great achievement when I was young boy.